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    Quod me nutrit me destruit Rinoa's Avatar
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    Ra's betrothed wife
    complexion of a deadly pallor
    eyes of cool sadness
    look upon the dark land
    Beautiful and enigmatic
    she's a goddess of the night
    Her pale smile draws
    draws many a thing near
    Eudemons and caspers
    to dance under her
    But her wrath draws
    the bounties of Hell and beyond
    in endless floods of blood
    All this is as earth rests
    unprotected and weak
    when Ra rises once more,
    she hides her shame
    Because her love has arrived,
    he overcomes her power
    and conquers the sky
    Always a noble gentleman
    beckoning forth all good
    While she waits to live
    once more
    Lysa Maiya Marrie Garza
    - Rinoa

    Here is the deepest secret nobody knows. (Here is the root of the root, the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can hope or mind can hide). This is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart.

    - Excerpt from I Carry Your Heart by E.E. Cummings.

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    why is apollo,
    helios, ra and horus?

    why hecate,
    artemis and selene?

    ???

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    Thats a realy strange poem, a bit too confuzing o_O





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    Quod me nutrit me destruit Rinoa's Avatar
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    *sigh*

    It's referring to a "Ra's" wife. Her overall character and appearance. What she does, how she acts; all when Ra is away. Suddenly he returns, and brings with him power much more complex than her's and somehow she becomes small or nothing at all again. While Ra's a noble gentleman, she's rather ruthless and wild. The part that's referring to "she waits to live again" really means she's waiting for Ra to go away again so that she make be her true self. The whole masquerade she holds is just to make Ra happy.

    Bah, it's "strange," I know. But I was bored and just wrote away.

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    Quod me nutrit me destruit Rinoa's Avatar
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    "........................"

    Obviously you all are still "confuzed" seeing as no one else replied... Fine. I'll write a different one much more appropriate to your standards.

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    This is a beautiful piece of writing.

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    It's beautiful Rinoa, don't let others take you down because they don't fully grasp the poem's meaning

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    Thanks, Rinoa

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    I demand you give this a title. Now. Because if you don't...so help me, I will pout.
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