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    What Lust Can Do To A Man

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    What Lust Can Do To A Man

    a hip young girl
    I saw last week
    in tight blue jeans
    and matching tee

    is naked now
    in front of me
    spent of all her
    energy.

    a smile plays across
    my face,
    for something beautiful
    just took place


    a week ago
    I saw her there
    and kidnapped her,
    fucked her,
    starved her,
    killed her.
    Fucked her;
    now here we
    are naked, alone
    and embraced
    closer then two
    spoons stacked.

    and i kiss her
    softly
    and a smile
    plays across
    my face.




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    Same here!
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    boo

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    You make Olde seem moderate.

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    dude seek help.
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    it poetry, not reality. everyone calm down. read some bukowski and maybe you'll understand.

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    I know but still.

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    haha

    well, it got the reaction I suppose I should have anticipated. You should have seen the looks on the faces in my creative writing class.

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    I vote The Chocobo Knight as the official FFShrine Poet Laureate, that was amazing.
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    ha, thanks guys. there's more. and it's crazier.

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    am i the only one who can take a blatant joke? thats pretty funny.

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    um...if you killed her mid way , thats sick, do the killing last, dont rape dead chicks,'
    but hey, what ever works,
    very interesting.
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    yes its the height of ignorance to rape someone "after" killing them. some people just make me sick!

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    dead chicks dont say no.
    syntax error in line1980.
    good luck finding it!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by shakespeare View Post
    um...if you killed her mid way , thats sick, do the killing last, dont rape dead chicks,'
    but hey, what ever works,
    very interesting.
    Oh my God, the ignorance.

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    Gotta watch out for those Chocobo Knights.

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    whoa, thats hardcore.


    Sig too big

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    that was an intelligent poem. you captured the essence of lust perfectly.

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    That's hawt...
    I'm gonna believe it defeat you!

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    Prak is right. I love Prak.
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    That's wow.

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    You have the best name eva.

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