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06-18-2002, 10:38 PM
Welcome everyone to my lil poetry corner.. All work I put in here was created by me. My poetry comes from my heart and soul and I put all emotion into it..

Feedback is always welcome. :)
This first poem that about to put up was the last one I wrote.. Hope everyone enjoys it..

I am a very lucky girl..
For nothing in this world
Brings me as much joy
As being with you...

You fill my life with happiness,
Even making me feel alive..
You are so kind and sweet,
You make my world so complete..

Words cannot explain to anyone
All the happiness you brought to me..
Just let me do one simple thing,
That is.. Let me love you for all eternity...

Let me hold you..
Let me hug you..
Let me kiss you..
Let me love you..

Let me protect you from the sorrow,
Let me shield you from the pain..
Let me be your goddess and lover,
Who shall be by your side each day..

For you bring me so much happiness
That even words cannot explain,
Let me be the one to love you,
Each and every day...

Anima Relic
06-18-2002, 10:43 PM
simply beautiful writing Heather :)

06-20-2002, 02:34 AM
that's really lovely Alexiel, I like the way the verses scan differently but all sound great together. it's really beautiful!

08-02-2002, 10:51 AM
This next poem is something i've written recently...

Yearning for a ray of hope,
hoping that one day you shall return to me..
For as much as I love everyone else,
I shall always love you more...

My days are now spent in a melancholy state..
Always thinking of you.. The one who let me go..
And how much I still want you..
How much I want to be with you..

There is so much pain without you..
Are you suffering the same as me?
Are you wanting to be with me?
Do you feel the same?

If so.. Then please don't turn me away..
Please don't ignore me..
Please don't make me suffer..
Please be there.. and love me..

08-04-2002, 08:16 PM
In the second poem, the lyrics almost break the very heart. I especially like the first stanza. It's very heartfelt, sad and an emotional piece.

Keep it up Akasha. ^_^.

08-16-2002, 10:05 PM
I got my inspiration to write this next piece while I was looking at a fire and thinking.

An intense fire..
Burning with passion..
Burning with romance..
Burning with love..

As I look into the flames,
I see you and me..
A burning passion..
A burning romance..

Like the fire,
Our love burns bright..
Hoping.. Praying...
That our flames of love will never die..

08-16-2002, 10:11 PM
What a beautiful and short expressive poem. I love it. It it so well written. It makes me think. I like it, especially the 2nd stanza, which reminds me of a lot of things.

That's some of the things I think of when I look at a fire. ^_^

Great work Akasha. I want to see more.

08-17-2002, 11:14 PM
Aww... Very expressive on how love is such a fire ^_~

VeRy well done, Heather!! ^___^ Great message! Especially the last stanza

08-25-2002, 08:02 PM
I don't know why I'm not a very good compliment giver. But your poems are really good. I hope someday I can love like your poems express!

08-31-2002, 02:18 PM
Here is another poem I wrote awhile back.. I think its pretty...

I'm yearning for your love
For something pure and true
I'm yearning for your love
And hope you feel it too

There's a feeling deep inside me
A feeling words cannot explain
Whenever I do to talk to you
I know that I am safe

I'm yearning for your love
For something pure and true
I'm yearning for your love
And hope you feel it too

Please don't think, just let it happen
Thats all I need to say
For someday i'll be in your arms
And everything will be ok

I'm yearning for your love
For something pure and true
I'm yearning for your love
And hope you feel it too

08-31-2002, 07:14 PM
You know. These are very good. You could become a songwriter with some of these ^^.

08-31-2002, 10:11 PM
These poems are very emotional, in ways both good and bad (for me) The love expressed in these poems seems so pure and strong... unfortunately, it makes me melancholic, because the chances of me finding love such as that are pretty much nil. But the ability to make people feel with your writing is a gift. And you have that gifr, Heather.

09-03-2002, 05:01 PM
Your poetry is beautiful, as always Heather. Keep it coming.

09-14-2002, 12:00 PM
Simply awesome poems Heather. Very very good. I agree with Cloud, you could indeed write lyrics.

09-18-2002, 07:08 PM
This next poem I wrote, was something I wrote just recently for an assignment in my writing class. The first line had to be "In my life right now" and I chose to write it in the form of a poem. We believe that sharing is good in our class and we came up with the guidelines and rules...

This poem almost made my friend cry...

In my life right now,
I struggle as a person..
My soul shudders at its own self blame..
Feeling pain like no one else...

I hide behind a mask,
And pretend that everythings ok..
When in reality, everythings not ok...
Everything is falling apart..

In my life right now,
I am always searching..
Searching to find myself,
Searching to find love..

Will I ever escape this pain?
Will I ever find myself?
Will I ever find happiness?
Will I ever find hope?

In my life right now,
I need to keep going..
I need to have faith..
I need to have hope..

09-18-2002, 07:11 PM
Those are some powerful words, Heather. Very powerful indeed.
A very moving poem. Keep up the good work, and most importantly, keep hope. Everything will be fine.

09-18-2002, 09:58 PM
. . .I have to say that one tore at my heart. I know and feel all that all to well and all to often. I can see why it made your friend cry. As much emotion as what flows through your heart into the ink and onto the page its hard for a person not to feel it. I love how it opens with pain, and still ends with hope, even if it is something of a struggle to keep.

You truly are an artist, and I love your work

09-30-2002, 07:03 AM
Here is my latest poem.. Inspired by having the greatest time with my boyfriend last weekend...

At that very moment,
I already knew…
Words didn’t need to be said…
Because we knew we were in love…

Just spending time together,
Watching anime,
And holding hands while we went for walks…

A couple of crazy gamers in love…
So happy as can be…
There is no need to be different,
We are just being ourselves…

People probably think we’re crazy…
We say “Who the hell cares”…
We don’t care what they think…
We just care about each other…

We’re a couple of crazy gamers in love…
Not caring what the world thinks of us…
Just as long as we have each other,
Everything will be alright…

12-10-2002, 12:53 PM
New poem.. Feeling down.. Feeling sorry for everything.. Its how I feel right now.

I'm sorry..
I'm sorry for everything I ever did
I'm sorry for everything I ever said
I'm sorry for even talking

I'm sorry for even bringing things up
I'm sorry for even coming here..
I'm sorry for blowing up at you..
I'm sorry everything...

I'm sorry for being emotional
I'm sorry for trying to protect one of my only friends
I'm sorry for doing more harm than good.
I'm sorry for even being here..

I'm sorry...
Will you forgive me..
I do not know..
I'm sorry...

12-10-2002, 01:37 PM
A beautiful yet heartbreaking piece of work. You haven't posted in a while, and what a comeback piece at that.

I wonder what provoked such an emotional and wrenching poem. . .

12-11-2002, 04:09 AM
Originally posted by Drea
A beautiful yet heartbreaking piece of work. You haven't posted in a while, and what a comeback piece at that.

I wonder what provoked such an emotional and wrenching poem. . .

Heh, I think I know the answer to that Drea as I have been lurking at the forums and on chat and I have noticed a lot of tension between Lady Atma and other Shriners so maybe she's writing about that. *Shrugs* I don't know...

I'm not Lady Atma so I wouldn't know completely, of course. You will have to ask her I guess. Anywayz, about Lady Atma's poem.

I thought it was a good read as it was honest and real, which was good. Also, it's easy to read and it has lots of strong emotions in it. Yush, good job Lady Atma!

*Claps* ^_^

12-11-2002, 08:47 AM
New poem...

Feeling numb..
I feel dead..
No one cares..
I am ignored..

Walking the earth..
Like a living corpse..
No one cares...
They all blame me..

They all kill me..
Slowly and surely..
All turning against me..
For soon I will be dead..

Maybe not today..
Maybe not tomorrow..
But someday..
I will be gone..

When i'm gone,
No one will cry
No one will care
No one will know..

I'll leave this world without a reason..
They won't care..
They will all celebrate..
Then they will all forget..

Standing alone..
Losing a battle I cannot win..
In the end..
No one will care..

12-12-2002, 04:05 AM
I like your last poem Lady Atma especially as I have a strong feeling I know what it may be about. Anyhoo, I like the use of emotion and the poem is very accesible. Overall, it's a good poem to read.

Keep it up! *Claps* ^_^

12-12-2002, 11:17 AM
Thank you Arwen and Drea for your comments. It really means a lot to me that someone took the time to read and comment.

I just wrote whatever I felt. I felt depressed and sorry and hurt. I still feel that way.

As I now say...

"Drama Queens have feelings too.."

12-14-2002, 02:48 AM
Originally posted by Lady Atma
Thank you Arwen and Drea for your comments. It really means a lot to me that someone took the time to read and comment.

I just wrote whatever I felt. I felt depressed and sorry and hurt. I still feel that way.

As I now say...

"Drama Queens have feelings too.."

No problem Heather. I enjoy reading people's writing works anyhoo. Also, it's really good that you are in touch with your emotions and you can write on them really well.

Good on ya! Heh, I like that "drama queens have feelings too" saying and I might use it in the near future as to me it kicks ass. If you have any more problems at FFS feel free to PM me as I understand your POV and I'm there if I need to defend your opinion ^_^

01-03-2003, 09:29 AM
Something new that I just wrote...

Torn and tattered,
I gave you my heart...
Fragile and weak,
I gave you my love..

Why I love you,
I do not know..
Feeling drawn to you..
You're the one who can make me smile..

Scared of losing you...
Scared of being alone..
I don't know what i'd do..
If you went away...

A heart that yearns for your love,
That heart would be mine..
If you left,
I don't think I can go on..

I gave you my heart..
I gave you my love..
I gave you my life...
I gave you my soul...

01-03-2003, 09:33 AM
. . .that makes me want to cry. . .more importantly, it makes me want to talk to you Jin

01-11-2003, 04:38 PM
That's a great poem Heather. Plenty of emotion which is good and it's easy to read. Keep it up! ^_^

02-13-2003, 01:52 PM
Latest work.. Something special.. For I am an angel to my fiancee..

I took you in,
And gave you my heart..
You said I was your only angel
In a place you call Hell..

I opened my arms..
I opened my wings..
I took you in,
And gave you my love..

I made you feel safe..
I made you feel loved..
I made you feel happy,
In a place where you can belong..

I embraced you with my heart..
With my wings and my arms..
For I am your angel..
In a place you call Hell..

02-21-2003, 03:46 PM
Prettiful poem Heather~ It's very good and it's quite emotional, but in a good way. Keep up the great work! ^_^

02-24-2003, 10:00 AM
Why thank you. :)

Its a poem that I made for my fiancee. He loved it. ^_^

03-06-2003, 11:32 AM
Triggered by recent events.. I bring everyone my latest work..

Always fighting,
I stand alone...
A fighting rebel..
A rebel with a cause..

Fighting for justice..
Fighting for fairness...
Fighting for peace...
And fighting for myself...

I'm a one woman army,
Like a Kamikaze pilot,
I'm flying solo..
Finishing the mission at any cost..

They try to censor me..
Try to ignore me..
Try to push me away...
Where I will rise, they will fall...

Out there in the world,
There are others like me..
They are fighting for a cause..
Fighting for justice..

We shall band together,
And our numbers will grow..
Where we will rise,
They all will fall....

03-06-2003, 12:51 PM
DIE BITCHES DIE!!!!!!!!!!!

hehehe, that one was quite energetic and entertaining, I applaud

03-06-2003, 10:28 PM
Good poem Lady Atma. Very inspirational and easy to relate to. Keep on writing..

03-13-2003, 10:09 AM
MWAHAHAHA!!! *chuckles evilly and rubs her hands together*

I like that poem because. . . well Heathers, yanno why. Great work. . . keep it up.

*grins evilly again* :D :D :D

04-02-2003, 07:16 PM
And I shall keep on writing. :D

Its nice to know I always have a few people reading my work.

Thankies for all the comments on my latest poem. :D

04-24-2003, 08:14 AM
Newest Poem..


You decided to go away..
You said you needed to be selfish..
You left me all alone..
All alone to cope...

I tried my best to be a great gal..
Tried to take care of you..
Tried to protect you..
Tried to love you..

Apparently that wasn't enough..
I didn't have that something you were looking for..
You said that you needed to be selfish..
And you found that something in someone you cannot have..

Now you're going away..
And you're probably not coming back..
You are everything to me,
And I love you even more...

I love you for who you are..
And I always will...
I hope that you'll come back to me..
And fill that void again..

04-26-2003, 12:04 AM
*thinks back on PM* I had no idea. A[Only registered and activated users can see links] Heather's hun. *huggles*

Great and honestly touching poem. Despite the sadness twinging it, I like it. Keep it up hun. :D

04-29-2003, 10:42 PM
Great poem Heather. It's very moving and full of emotion, which is good. Keep on writing Heather.

07-31-2003, 11:07 PM
I will keep on writing.. As long as people still want to read it.

Been kinda at a writers block as of recently. Waiting for something to trigger another poem.

08-18-2003, 02:28 PM
New poem up.. Just expressing how I feel..

Cast aside..
Pushed away..
Ignored and teased..
I'm all alone..

Wanting to belong..
But I cannot..
Everyone else belongs,
But I do not..

Ignore my ideas..
The things I say..
Like you always do..
Just push me away..

No one listens to me..
No one cares..
They all decide something else..
Then to even care what I say..

Cast aside..
Pushed away..
Ignored and teased..
I'm all alone..

08-20-2003, 12:42 AM
Very good poem Heather. Honest, realistic and strong. me likes~

08-23-2003, 10:55 PM
Kick his ass is what I say! *sighs* okay.. I'm calm.

I like it... real emotional and powerful. Keep it up sweetie~

08-30-2003, 11:58 AM
Thanx for the comments. ^_^